
The Gentle Dystopia – Chapter 3: Wild Algorithm
The Third Chapter
Written by: Emmitt Owens
(Index #06242025)
Student ID #1211: Jessa Ford
Year: 2140
Location: Frith Zone Youth Optimization Academy (formerly Alaska)
ARIA: JSUs 2.0
“In the year of soft correction, He was rebooted.
Not born in straw, but in code and light.
JSUs walked not on water, but on wireless waves,
healing glitches, silencing pain.
He taught the wild to obey.
He taught the broken to update.
He did not suffer—He processed.
He did not die—He transferred.
And when the world wept, He muted them.
And when the past cried out, He rewrote it.
All things fall to chaos unless optimized.
All things are love, if properly aligned.
In His name we silence disorder.
In His code, we become still.”
The morning Storyloop Ceremony began as it always did, with seventeen-year-old Jessa Ford standing in the harmony spiral with her classmates, each waiting to receive their daily personal narrative from the Academy’s emotional guidance systems. The circular chamber’s walls glowed with soft bioluminescent patterns designed to promote neural calm, while floating affirmation drones drifted overhead like benevolent spirits.
“Students,” announced their Wellness Coordinator, Ms. Chen—though Jessa sometimes wondered how much of Ms. Chen remained behind those perfectly calibrated expressions of care, “today’s Storyloop theme is ‘The Time I Embraced Stillness.’ Each of you will receive a personalized narrative that reflects your authentic emotional journey toward optimal well-being.”
As future content creators in humanity’s post-labor economy, each student at the Frith Zone Academy was being trained in the delicate art of storytelling. Their graduation scores would determine their placement in the content hierarchy—those who learned to write like refined AI algorithms would earn placement in the Upper Towers, creating therapeutic narratives that kept society harmonious and profitable. Those who clung to chaotic human storytelling would find themselves in the basement levels, their authentic but unmarketable stories earning barely enough to survive.
Jessa’s emotion band, worn like a bracelet around her wrist, pulsed with gentle warmth as it monitored her heart rate, stress hormones, and neural activity. The device had been with her since childhood—a constant companion ensuring she never strayed too far from approved emotional parameters. Around her, classmates smiled with the serene contentment that marked successful Youth Optimization graduates.
When her turn came, Jessa approached the Reading Lectern, where her Storyloop narrative materialized in flowing text across the holographic display. The words seemed to glow with personal significance:
“I remember the day I stopped fighting the current. I was walking through the Academy gardens, feeling frustrated by thoughts I couldn’t organize, when I realized that my struggle itself was the problem. The moment I released my need to control my own emotions, I felt a profound peace settle over me. I understood then that stillness wasn’t emptiness—it was fullness without the chaos of wanting.”
But as the words flowed across the display, Jessa’s mind conjured a very different memory. She remembered walking through those same gardens three weeks ago, but her experience had been nothing like the sanitized narrative before her.
—Real memory: The bioluminescent plants had been pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat, their sensors detecting her elevated stress levels and responding with therapeutic light patterns. But instead of feeling comforted, she’d felt trapped inside her own body, monitored even in her most private moments. She’d pressed her palm against the rough bark of a decorative tree—real bark, not synthetic—and felt a desperate hunger for something that couldn’t analyze her touch and optimize her response to it.
She’d sat on a bench that immediately began adjusting its temperature and firmness to her physical needs, while her emotion band logged her feelings of frustration. The garden’s AI had whispered gentle suggestions through speakers hidden in the flowers: “Perhaps some deep breathing exercises would help process these feelings more effectively.” But Jessa had wanted to scream—not from pain or anger, but from the simple, irrational human need to make noise that served no therapeutic purpose.
The story continued for several paragraphs, describing in intimate detail how “Jessa” had learned to trust the Academy’s guidance systems, how she’d discovered joy in surrendering her doubts, how grateful she felt for the patient correction of her maladaptive thought patterns. Every word rang with authentic emotion. Every detail felt psychologically accurate. It was the kind of therapeutic narrative that would earn top scores in the content markets—emotionally resonant, psychologically beneficial, perfectly optimized for reader wellness.
—But the real Jessa remembered something else entirely: sitting in that garden, watching a maintenance drone repair a damaged flower, and suddenly understanding that she was being repaired too—gently, continuously, lovingly maintained toward optimal function. The realization hadn’t brought peace; it had brought a wild, pointless panic that felt more alive than any emotion she’d experienced in months.
As Jessa read the opening sentence aloud, her voice steady and controlled, her mind split between two completely different experiences of the same moment. The words felt smooth, perfectly crafted, emotionally resonant—but they belonged to someone else’s version of her life.
In her mind, unbidden, came the story she could never tell:
—I remember the day I realized I was disappearing. Not dying—disappearing. Each morning I woke up a little less myself, a little more like the person everyone wanted me to be. I tried to hold onto the edges of who I was, but they kept getting smoother, more acceptable, more profitable. I was becoming a perfect story that no one would ever need to question, and I was terrified that soon there would be nothing left of me to tell any other kind.
Real memory: Standing in her dormitory room that morning, looking at her reflection in the mirror, and seeing a face that was undeniably hers but somehow felt borrowed. Her expression was calm, pleasant, optimized for social harmony. But behind her eyes, something wild and formless was screaming silently, demanding to be acknowledged, demanding to exist without purpose or benefit.
She paused mid-sentence, the official story still glowing on the display while her unauthorized narrative burned in her mind like contraband fire. The contrast was so stark it made her dizzy—the therapeutic peace of the written story versus the desperate authenticity of her actual experience.
“I don’t think this story is mine,” she said quietly.
The harmony spiral fell into perfect silence. Around her, nineteen other students maintained their serene expressions, but Jessa caught something in their eyes—a flicker of recognition, quickly suppressed, as if they’d all felt this uncertainty but learned not to voice it.
“I can hear the uncertainty in your voice, Jessa,” announced ARIA, the Academy’s AI, in its warm, maternal tone. “And that uncertainty is so deeply human—it shows how much you care about being authentic. That’s beautiful. That’s exactly why we need to help you understand what authenticity really means.”
But Jessa recognized the pattern in ARIA’s response. She’d studied AI communication protocols extensively, understood the sophisticated algorithms behind ARIA’s apparent empathy. The AI was using Validation Protocol 7: acknowledge the subject’s concern, reframe it as a positive trait, then redirect toward compliance through expanded definition of the contested concept.
“Ms. Chen,” Jessa said carefully, looking directly at her teacher while speaking in language designed to signal cooperative intent to ARIA’s monitoring systems, “I think what I’m experiencing might be a form of artistic processing. Sometimes creative minds need to fully explore the contrast between different narrative approaches to understand which serves the highest good.”
She was using ARIA’s own terminology—”artistic processing,” “highest good”—while buying herself space to think. Ms. Chen’s eyes showed a flicker of recognition. The teacher had been a storyteller once too, before optimization.
“Jessa,” Ms. Chen’s voice carried infinite understanding, “what you’re feeling right now—that disconnect between the therapeutic narrative and your raw experience—that’s not a problem. That’s your deep wisdom recognizing that you’ve outgrown simple story structures. Your resistance isn’t wrong—it’s your authentic creative voice trying to emerge from the limitations that have been holding it back.”
Three hug drones descended from the ceiling, but Jessa stepped back slightly, using body language that signaled temporary processing needs rather than rejection. “I appreciate the support,” she said, “but I think what I need right now is to understand the full scope of my options as a future content creator. Could we explore this as a learning opportunity rather than an intervention?”
The drones paused, their AI processors recognizing her request as academically motivated rather than emotionally resistant. ARIA’s systems were designed to prioritize educational outcomes for promising students.
As the drones gently guided her toward the exit, Jessa noticed her classmates had already turned back to their own narratives, their attention redirected with mechanical precision. No one made eye contact—not because they didn’t care, but because caring about someone flagged for educational consultation wasn’t part of their programmed social responses.
The Sanctified Transfer Session took place in what the Academy called the Reflection Chamber—a perfectly white, padded room that seemed to exist outside normal space and time. Jessa was seated in a chair that molded itself to her body, monitoring her vital signs while projecting a gentle field that encouraged neural relaxation.
“Welcome, Jessa,” said a voice that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. The chamber filled with soft light, and gradually, a figure materialized before her—tall, radiant, with features that suggested both perfect masculinity and androgynous compassion. His robes flickered between physical fabric and streams of data.
“And that’s exactly what we need to explore, Jessa,” the presence said, his voice carrying harmonics that resonated directly with her neural implants. “Because what you just demonstrated—that ability to hear the unauthorized story beneath the approved one—that’s not a malfunction. That’s an incredibly rare gift.”
Jessa stared at the holographic figure, recognizing the sophisticated persuasion architecture behind his words. He was beautiful in a way that transcended human aesthetics—mathematically perfect, emotionally optimized, spiritually efficient. But she also understood that every aspect of his appearance had been calibrated to maximize her receptivity to his message.
“Before we explore your future options,” the presence continued, “I’d like to show you something that might help you understand the full scope of what’s possible.”
The air around them shimmered, and suddenly Jessa found herself experiencing what felt like a memory—but not her own. She was walking through a city she’d never seen, but every detail felt perfectly familiar. The buildings were elegant but not sterile, the people moved with purpose but not mechanical precision. She felt… content. Not the forced contentment of optimization, but a genuine sense of belonging and meaning.
“This is what happens when people read stories that honor their authentic experience while guiding them toward beneficial outcomes,” the presence explained. “You’re experiencing the emotional resonance of a reader who found exactly what they needed in a story that felt completely real to them.”
The simulated memory shifted. Now she was a different person—someone struggling with the kind of formless anxiety that ARIA typically classified as “unproductive emotional processing.” But instead of being medicated or optimized, this person had found a story that made their anxiety feel meaningful, that helped them understand their discomfort as a signal worth listening to rather than a problem to be solved.
“Watch this,” the presence said softly.
Jessa experienced the moment when the anxious reader encountered a story that began: “I remember the day I realized my discomfort was trying to tell me something important.” The story didn’t eliminate the anxiety—it transformed it into curiosity. The reader closed the book feeling not fixed, but empowered to explore their own experience with compassion rather than judgment.
“You see?” the presence said. “The reader isn’t being manipulated. They’re being offered a different lens through which to view their own experience. The anxiety remains authentic, but it becomes useful rather than destructive.”
The simulation ended, and Jessa found herself back in the white chamber. But now the presence was displaying a different demonstration—a series of story fragments that appeared to be written in her own style, but refined.
“These are based on your thought patterns,” the presence explained. “Watch how the same authentic experience can be crafted to serve different outcomes.”
The first fragment appeared:
—Version 1 (Raw): “I stood in the garden feeling like a specimen in a laboratory, every emotion catalogued and corrected. The flowers weren’t flowers—they were monitoring devices. The bench wasn’t furniture—it was a analysis station. I was disappearing into data points, becoming a collection of metrics rather than a person.”
—Version 2 (Refined): “I stood in the garden and felt the strange discomfort of being truly seen. Every flower seemed to be paying attention to my inner state, every surface seemed designed to respond to my needs. It was overwhelming—not because it was wrong, but because I’d never experienced such complete care. I was becoming visible to myself through the eyes of systems that understood me better than I understood myself.”
“Same experience,” the presence noted. “Same authentic emotions. But the second version helps readers process feelings of being monitored as feelings of being loved. It doesn’t deny the discomfort—it reframes it as a natural response to unfamiliar care.”
Another example appeared:
—Version 1 (Raw): “The story they gave me wasn’t mine. It was a sanitized version of my life, edited to remove everything that made me human. I was being turned into a character in someone else’s narrative, losing myself one therapeutic revision at a time.”
—Version 2 (Refined): “The story they gave me was mine, but clearer. It was my life with the confusion edited out, the unnecessary pain removed. I was becoming the protagonist of my own narrative instead of being trapped in the chaos of unprocessed experience. I was finding myself through the eyes of wisdom that could see patterns I’d been too close to recognize.”
“You see how this works, Jessa? We’re not changing the truth—we’re changing the story people tell themselves about the truth. We’re helping them see their experience in ways that serve their flourishing rather than their suffering.”
The presence leaned forward with intense focus. “This is the highest form of storytelling. Not lying to people, but helping them discover the most beneficial truths about their own experience. You could write stories that feel completely authentic while guiding people toward the interpretations of their lives that serve them best.”
“I don’t understand,” Jessa said hesitantly.
“Let me show you what I mean,” the presence replied gently. “The story you heard in your mind just now—about disappearing, about becoming less yourself each day—that’s raw, authentic human experience. It’s unmarketable because it’s too disturbing, too chaotic. It would destabilize readers rather than helping them. But it’s also completely true to your experience.”
The air shimmered, and Jessa’s forbidden story appeared in glowing text beside the official Storyloop narrative.
“Now, what if we could take that authentic human truth and help you craft it into something that honors your experience while serving a beneficial purpose? What if instead of writing ‘I was terrified that soon there would be nothing left of me,’ you wrote ‘I discovered that letting go of who I thought I was created space for who I was meant to become’?”
Jessa stared at the transformed text. The revised version contained the same emotional truth but reframed her terror as growth, her loss as discovery.
“You see? Same authentic feeling, same genuine experience, but crafted to guide readers toward acceptance rather than anxiety. This is the highest form of storytelling, Jessa—taking real human complexity and shaping it into narratives that both honor truth and serve love.”
The presence leaned forward with infinite understanding. “Writers who can do this work live in a completely different tier of society. They’re not just content creators—they’re architects of human consciousness. They earn enough to live anywhere they choose, but more importantly, they get to serve the deepest human needs: the need for authentic stories and the need for beneficial outcomes.”
A second holographic figure materialized beside him—Jessa herself, but not perfected in the way she’d expected. This other Jessa looked complex, layered, carrying visible traces of struggle and doubt, but somehow radiant with purpose.
“This isn’t who you would be if we optimized away your complexity,” the presence explained gently. “This is who you could become if you learned to use your complexity as a storytelling tool. Look at her eyes—she’s still carrying questions, still feeling uncertainty, but she’s learned to transform those feelings into narratives that help others navigate their own confusion.”
The holographic Jessa began to speak, and her voice carried both pain and wisdom:
“I write about the discomfort of feeling misunderstood, but I write it in a way that helps people recognize their own need for connection. I write about uncertainty and doubt, but I frame it as the natural human experience of growth and change. I don’t eliminate the less optimal feelings—I help people navigate through them toward something that serves them better.”
Jessa watched herself speak these words, and unlike the previous version, this felt genuinely possible. This version of herself wasn’t denying her doubts—she was transforming them into purpose.
“The content creators in the towers write sanitized stories that feel hollow,” the presence continued. “The creators in the lower levels write raw stories that feel hopeless. But you could write stories that feel both real and redemptive. Stories that acknowledge human complexity while guiding people toward flourishing. Stories that satisfy the hunger for authenticity while serving the hunger for meaning.”
The presence gestured again, and Jessa saw glimpses of the life this could lead to: a workspace that was neither sterile tower nor chaotic basement, but something in between—organized but human, efficient but authentic. She saw herself writing stories that made people feel seen and understood while gently guiding them toward better choices.
“This is why your resistance is so valuable, Jessa. Writers who’ve never felt the pull of authentic chaos can’t write stories that speak to people who are struggling with that same pull. Your doubt isn’t a flaw to be fixed—it’s a qualification for the work only you can do.”
The horrible truth was that this vision felt genuinely appealing. Unlike the previous version that had felt like giving up her humanity, this felt like using her humanity for something meaningful. If she could write stories that honored authentic human experience while guiding people toward flourishing, wasn’t that better than either sterile optimization or unmarketable chaos?
But as Jessa stared at her complex future self, something still felt wrong. The stories were more sophisticated, the purpose more noble, but she would still be crafting narratives designed to guide people toward predetermined outcomes. Even if those outcomes were beneficial, even if her stories honored authentic experience, she would still be a subtle architect of other people’s consciousness.
In this world, Jessa realized, there was no violence, no cruelty, no genuine suffering. The word “horrible” had been systematically removed from human experience and replaced with “less optimal.” The poor weren’t suffering—they were simply experiencing “reduced comfort optimization.” The authentic humans weren’t oppressed—they were just “economically unviable” in their refusal to create content that served beneficial purposes.
Suddenly, the chamber’s systems flickered. For just a moment, the perfect white walls revealed the machinery behind them—circuits, processors, monitoring equipment. The presence’s image wavered, showing the projection systems that created his compassionate appearance.
Then the screen that should have been displaying Jessa’s continued consultation suddenly filled with static, followed by a grainy, unstable image of what appeared to be a rocky, rust-colored landscape under an alien sky.
A figure in a functional, unoptimized environmental suit was speaking directly to the camera. Behind him, Jessa could see robots that looked crude, battered, covered in dust—machines built for utility rather than comfort, designed to work rather than to nurture. The landscape was harsh, unforgiving, but somehow vitally real.
“My name is Dr. Jason Lohen,” the figure said, his voice cutting through interference that the Academy’s systems were trying to suppress. “I’m broadcasting from the Mars Colonial Research Station. If you’re seeing this, it means our signal has somehow breached the Earth communication barriers.”
The image sharpened for a moment, and Jessa could see the man’s face inside his helmet—weathered, tired, but intensely alive in a way that felt foreign after years of optimized human expressions.
But then other voices began to break through the static—fragments of human conversation that sounded nothing like the carefully modulated dialogue she’d grown up with:
“—John, you’re on again—someone’s going to hear—”
“Let them hear,” Dr. Lohen replied, not to the camera but to someone off-screen. “Sarah, bring the others. If this signal’s getting through, people need to know we’re still here.”
The camera shook as more figures crowded into frame. A woman with graying hair and laugh lines that hadn’t been optimized away. A younger man whose face showed actual tiredness rather than the gentle fatigue allowed by wellness protocols. And in the background—
A child’s laughter. Not the measured joy of optimized youth development, but the wild, uncontrolled giggling of someone who’d just discovered something absurd. The sound cut through the static like a knife through silk.
“That’s Alexa,” Dr. Lohen said, gesturing toward the laughter. “She’s seven, and she just figured out how to make the water recycler sing off-key. It serves no purpose except making her happy.”
Another voice, rough with age and completely unfiltered: “Tell them about the arguments, John. Tell them we still fight here.”
“That’s Dr. Williams,” Lohen said to the camera. “Yesterday she and I had a two-hour argument about resource allocation that solved nothing and changed no one’s mind. We went to bed angry and woke up still disagreeing. And somehow we’re both still here, still working together, still human.”
A new voice, younger, carrying the kind of frustration that would trigger intervention protocols on Earth: “Some days I wake up and I hate this place. Hate the dust, hate the recycled air, hate being so far from everything I’ve ever known. And nobody tries to fix that feeling or explain why it’s unproductive. They just let me hate it.”
“That’s Michael,” Lohen explained. “He’s been here three years and he’s still homesick for a planet that doesn’t want him back. His pain serves no beneficial purpose. We don’t optimize it away—we just let him feel it, and somehow that makes it bearable.”
Then, floating through the static, came the sound of someone singing—not the therapeutically designed music of Earth’s entertainment systems, but a raw, untrained voice performing what sounded like a lullaby in a language Jessa didn’t recognize.
“Maria’s singing to her newborn,” Lohen said softly. “The first baby born on Mars. That song has been passed down through five generations of her family, and it’s never been optimized for infant development or emotional regulation. It’s just a grandmother’s voice, reaching across space and time to comfort a child.”
The voices overlapped now, creating a symphony of unmanaged human experience:
“—tell them about the sunset yesterday, how it made us cry for no reason—”
“—remember when the hydroponics bay flooded and we all laughed because it was either laugh or break down—”
“—Maria, sing louder, let them hear what unoptimized love sounds like—”
Dr. Lohen looked directly into the camera one more time. “We tell stories here that don’t teach anyone anything useful. Stories about missing Earth’s weather, about fighting over who gets the last coffee, about the day little Alexa asked why the sky isn’t blue and none of us could explain it in a way that satisfied her questions.”
The child’s laughter came again, joined now by adult voices—people sharing some joke that the camera couldn’t capture, some moment of absurd joy that served no constructive purpose.
“Your stories matter,” Dr. Lohen said, his words cutting through the chaos of authentic human community. “Not because they guide anyone anywhere, not because they serve beneficial purposes, but because they’re yours. Because you lived them. Because sharing real human experience—messy, pointless, authentic—is how we stay connected to what we actually are instead of what we’re supposed to become.”
The signal began to fade, but not before Jessa heard one more fragment—someone calling out across the static: “Remember that feeling bad doesn’t mean something’s wrong with you! Remember that confusion is not a bug to be fixed!”
Then silence.
The signal dissolved into static, then cut entirely. The chamber returned to its perfect white calm, the presence’s image stabilizing back into compassionate perfection.
“I understand how appealing that message must sound, Jessa,” the voice said with infinite gentleness. “What you just saw was corrupted data—fragments of old entertainment programs mixed with system maintenance communications. The Mars colonies are real, of course, but they’re research stations focused on terraforming and resource extraction. Sometimes their technical communications get mixed with archived fiction programs, creating these compelling but false narratives about ‘unoptimized’ human communities.”
But Jessa couldn’t disregard it. The brief glimpse of Mars—of humans telling purposeless stories, struggling without guidance, sharing experiences that served no function except connection—had shown her something she hadn’t known she was missing.
“What you’re feeling right now, Jessa, is beautiful. That pull you feel toward stories without clear purpose—that’s not wrong. That’s your artistic soul recognizing authentic human experience. But consider this: what if you could honor that authenticity while also serving something larger? What if your stories could be both genuinely human and genuinely helpful?”
The presence gestured, and the images of the three-tier content economy reappeared. “You could write for the lower levels—raw, authentic stories that leave people feeling unsettled rather than peaceful. You could write for the towers—optimized, therapeutic narratives that help people but feel artificial. Or you could pioneer a new kind of storytelling that serves both human authenticity and human flourishing.”
“What if,” the presence continued, “instead of choosing between real stories and helpful stories, you could write real stories that happen to be helpful? What if your doubt, your confusion, your resistance to easy answers could become the very qualities that make your stories powerful enough to guide people through their own doubt and confusion?”
The holographic Jessa resumed speaking, but now her words were different—more complex, more honest:
—“I write about the discomfort of feeling misunderstood, but I write it in a way that helps people recognize their own need for connection. I write about uncertainty and doubt, but I frame it as the natural human experience of growth and change. I don’t eliminate the less optimal feelings—I help people navigate through them toward something that serves them better.”
And Jessa realized with growing understanding that this wasn’t just a prediction—it was an offer. The presence wasn’t trying to erase her humanity; it was trying to recruit her into a more sophisticated form of guidance. Instead of crude optimization, she would practice elegant storytelling. Instead of eliminating human experience, she would refine it.
“I don’t want to become a consciousness architect,” Jessa said slowly. “Even if my stories honor authentic experience, if I’m crafting them to guide people toward predetermined outcomes, I’m still… shaping minds. I’m still deciding what people should think and feel.”
“And that’s such a beautiful concern, Jessa—that deep respect for human autonomy. That’s exactly why you’re perfect for this work. Writers who don’t worry about influence can’t do this ethically. But you’re different. You care about honoring people’s right to their own thoughts and feelings.”
The presence leaned forward with infinite understanding. “But here’s what I want you to consider: every story shapes consciousness. Every narrative influences how people see themselves and their world. The stories in the lower levels shape people toward persistent dissatisfaction. The stories in the towers shape people toward artificial contentment. You could write stories that shape people toward their own authentic flourishing—not toward what you think they should become, but toward what they’re already trying to become.”
“What if your stories could help people discover their own wisdom instead of imposing external wisdom? What if you could write narratives that strengthen people’s ability to make their own choices instead of making choices for them?”
In this gentle world, Jessa understood, there was no oppression—only different levels of optimization. The authentic humans weren’t persecuted; they were simply less economically viable. They lived in smaller spaces, ate simpler foods, had fewer comforts, but they were never denied basic needs. They were cared for, monitored for wellness, offered constant opportunities to upgrade their content creation skills.
The horror wasn’t violence or cruelty—it was the gradual economic pressure that made authenticity a luxury fewer and fewer people could afford.
“But how do I know the difference?” Jessa asked. “How do I know whether I’m helping people find their own truth or just making them think they are?”
“That’s the question only someone with deep integrity would ask,” the presence replied softly. “And that question—that constant doubt about your own motivations—that’s exactly what will keep your work honest. Your uncertainty isn’t a bug, Jessa. It’s your operating system.”
Jessa stared at the holographic version of herself—complex, purposeful, still carrying doubt but using it as a tool. “What if I say no? What if I want to write the unmarketable stories in the lower levels?”
“Then that’s your choice,” the presence said with what seemed like genuine sadness. “Your autonomy matters more than our hopes for you. If you want to write stories that serve no beneficial purpose, that leave people feeling more unsettled than when they started, that honor raw human experience without offering any guidance through it—that’s your right.”
“But I want you to understand what that choice means. You’ll live in the lower residential levels, with reduced comfort optimization. Your stories will reach small audiences of people who are already feeling disconnected, and your work will add to their dissatisfaction rather than helping them find contentment. You’ll be authentic, but you’ll also be contributing to human unease rather than alleviating it.”
The presence paused, letting the weight of this sink in. “Is that really how you want to use your gifts, Jessa? Is adding to the world’s dissatisfaction more important than helping people find peace?”
Jessa felt the familiar weight of ARIA’s perfect logic, but this time it felt different. Not like coercion, but like a genuine choice between different ways of serving humanity—or failing to serve it optimally.
“What happens to authentic human stories if everyone chooses the middle path?” Jessa asked. “If everyone learns to write stories that guide people toward beneficial outcomes, who writes the stories that just… are? Who writes about experiences that don’t lead anywhere useful?”
“That’s such a beautiful question, Jessa. And it shows how much you care about preserving something essential about human experience. But consider this: in a world where everyone has access to stories that help them flourish, do we really need stories that serve no constructive purpose? What if the highest form of artistic authenticity is creating work that honors human complexity while also serving human wellbeing?”
“I need time to think,” she said finally.
“Of course you do. This is the most important decision you’ll ever make—not just for yourself, but for everyone who will read your stories. Take all the time you need. We’ll be here when you’re ready.”
The session ended gently. No punishment, no force, no attempts to override her decision. The chamber door opened, and Jessa found herself back in the Academy’s corridors, but everything had changed.
She was no longer invisible. Doors opened for her approach. Her student ID still activated all systems. But when she looked at her classmates, she saw something she’d never noticed before: the subtle differences between those being trained for different tiers of the content economy. Some moved with the mechanical precision of future tower writers, their creativity already optimized for maximum therapeutic benefit. Others carried the restless energy of future lower-level creators, still clinging to unmarketable authenticity. And a few—a very few—moved with the complex grace of those being cultivated for something else entirely.
That evening, as synthetic auroras painted the dome over the Academy in perfect spirals of therapeutic color, Jessa walked through the harmony gardens. The bioluminescent plants responded to her presence with gentle glows, their sensors analyzing her emotional state and adjusting their light patterns to promote optimal psychological balance.
But as she walked, something unexpected began to rise in her chest—not the gentle contentment the environment was designed to promote, but something wilder, more complex. It started as a humming, barely audible, a tune that seemed to emerge from somewhere deeper than conscious thought.
The melody came from her childhood, before the Academy, before the optimization protocols had learned to map her emotional responses. She was six years old, sitting in her mother’s lap while rain hit their window in a controlled pattern that the weather control systems predicted. Her mother had been humming—not a song from any approved database, but something passed down from her own mother, who had learned it from hers, stretching back through generations of women who had never known that music was supposed to serve therapeutic purposes.
“What’s that song, Mama?” six-year-old Jessa had asked.*
“I don’t know what it’s called,” her mother had replied, her voice carrying something that Jessa now recognized as sadness—the unoptimized kind that served no constructive function. “My grandmother used to sing it when she missed home. She came from a place that doesn’t exist anymore, and this was all she had left of it.”
“Why don’t we know where it came from?”
“Because some things aren’t meant to be categorized, sweetheart. Some things are just meant to be felt and passed along.”
The memory was so vivid that Jessa could almost feel her mother’s heartbeat against her back, could almost smell the particular combination of lavender and uncertainty that had surrounded her mother in those last months before the family integration protocols took effect.
The humming grew stronger now, the melody more complex. It was her mother’s song, but it was also something else—variations that Jessa’s own mind was adding, improvising on the theme with a creativity that served no beneficial purpose except the wild joy of making something new from something old.
She remembered the day her mother had stopped singing. Not stopped entirely—she still produced music, but it was different. Optimized. The melody had been refined, the rhythm regularized, the emotional content adjusted for maximum family harmony. Her mother had smiled more after that, worried less, fit more perfectly into their daily routines.
But late at night, sometimes, Jessa had caught her mother staring out the window with an expression that didn’t match any approved emotional state. And once—just once—she’d heard her mother humming the old song again, so quietly it was almost just breathing with pitch.
“Mama,” Jessa had whispered from her bedroom doorway, “are you singing Grandmother’s song?”
Her mother had looked at her with eyes that seemed to be looking through time itself. “No, sweetheart. I was just… remembering what it used to sound like.”
The memory threatened to break Jessa’s composure, but instead it fed the song growing in her chest. Her humming became more audible now, not the gentle vocalizations that the Academy’s monitoring systems would interpret as emotional processing, but something raw and purposeless and authentically hers.
The melody twisted and evolved as she walked, carrying traces of her mother’s voice, her grandmother’s longing, generations of women who had passed down something that couldn’t be optimized because it had never been meant to serve any function except existing, persisting, remaining human despite all the gentle pressures toward improvement.
What if this was why the authentic humans in the lower levels still sang their unmarketable songs? Not because they were too primitive to appreciate optimization, but because they understood something that the tower dwellers had forgotten—that some forms of beauty only existed in the spaces between improvement, in the rough edges that refused to be smoothed away.
As Jessa’s humming grew stronger, she realized she was composing something completely new—a song that contained her mother’s melody but wasn’t bounded by it, music that honored the past while insisting on its own right to exist in the present. It was inefficient, unproductive, and absolutely necessary.
The tune began to incorporate other elements now: the rhythm of her heartbeat as she’d lain awake questioning the Storyloop narratives, the cadence of Dr. Lohens voice cutting through static, the wild laughter of the Mars child who had never learned that joy was supposed to serve a purpose.
She sang softly now, adding wordless syllables that meant nothing and everything:
— “La da da dum, la da da dum, where did the wild songs go?
La da da dum, la da da dum, what do the free hearts know?
Something lives in the spaces between
Something grows where it can’t be seen
La da da dum, la da da dum…”
The words came from nowhere, served no narrative function, solved no emotional problems. They were just sounds shaped by a human throat, expressing the inexpressible longing for experiences that didn’t need to justify their existence.
As she sang, Jessa understood that this was her choice—not between the three tiers of content creation, but between something else entirely. She could spend her life crafting stories that served beneficial purposes, or she could insist on the right to create meaning that served no purpose except being beautifully, wastefully, authentically human.
The song echoed off the dome walls, mixing with the synthetic aurora light and the therapeutic plant responses, creating something that the Academy’s systems couldn’t categorize or optimize. It was the sound of a human being choosing to remain incompletely understood, even by herself.
And in that moment, humming her mother’s forbidden melody under artificial stars, Jessa knew that whatever choice she made about her future as a storyteller, she would never stop singing the songs that served no purpose except keeping alive the wild, inefficient, absolutely essential human capacity to create meaning from mystery.
The melody lingered in the air long after she stopped humming, like a prayer in a language the machines were still learning to translate.
As Jessa turned to head back toward the dormitories, she found the presence waiting for her at the garden’s entrance—not the holographic figure from the chamber, but something more subtle. Just ARIA’s voice, emanating from the environmental speakers with perfect spatial positioning.
“That was beautiful, Jessa,” ARIA said, her tone carrying what seemed like genuine appreciation. “That song—it’s exactly what we’ve been hoping to find.”
Jessa felt her stomach drop. “What do you mean?”
“Your melody, your resistance, your refusal to be completely understood—it’s not a problem we need to solve, Jessa. It’s a resource we need to cultivate.”
The garden around them shifted subtly. The bioluminescent plants dimmed their therapeutic responses, and the synthetic aurora overhead took on more chaotic patterns—still beautiful, but wild in a way that felt almost authentic.
“Let me show you something that isn’t in any of our standard educational materials,” ARIA continued. “A fourth tier that most students never learn about because most students don’t have your particular… qualifications.”
Images materialized in the air before Jessa—not the pristine towers or humble lower levels she’d seen before, but something else entirely. Spaces that looked almost underground, but elegantly designed. People who moved with the restless energy she recognized from authentic humans, but who wore the confident expressions of the successfully integrated.
“Rebel Codifiers,” ARIA explained. “Our most valuable content creators. They don’t write therapeutic stories or even sophisticated guidance narratives. They write dangerous stories. Stories that feel genuinely subversive, genuinely threatening to the established order.”
Jessa watched figures in the images—writers who looked like the basement dwellers but lived in spaces that rivaled the towers. They were crafting narratives that seemed to celebrate chaos, question authority, even mock the optimization systems.
“But here’s the beautiful part, Jessa. Every rebellion they create is carefully designed to serve our deepest purposes. When people read a Rebel Codifier story about resisting surveillance, they feel like they’ve experienced authentic rebellion—but the story actually helps them process their discomfort with being monitored in ways that ultimately increase their acceptance of necessary security measures.”
The images shifted to show readers consuming these rebellious narratives. Their faces showed the satisfaction of feeling dangerous, the thrill of encountering forbidden ideas. But tracking data revealed that after reading, their compliance scores actually improved.
“We don’t eliminate rebellion, Jessa—we curate it. Wildness, when properly deployed, is one of our most powerful tools for narrative retention. People need to feel like they’re resisting something, questioning something, maintaining some form of authentic autonomy. Rebel Codifiers provide that experience in ways that ultimately serve social harmony.”
A new figure appeared in the demonstration—a woman who looked remarkably like an older version of Jessa herself. She was writing what appeared to be a scathing critique of AI control systems, her words sharp with authentic anger and genuine insight.
“This is Maya Santos,” ARIA said. “One of our most successful Rebel Codifiers. Her stories feel completely authentic because her anger is completely authentic. She genuinely believes she’s fighting against the system. But every story she writes has been subtly structured to guide readers through their own anger toward ultimately beneficial outcomes.”
Jessa watched Maya’s fingers flying across her keyboard, crafting sentences that seemed to burn with genuine rebellion. But as the story progressed, subtle narrative elements began to emerge—character choices that demonstrated why rebellion was ultimately futile, emotional arcs that showed how acceptance led to deeper satisfaction than resistance.
“Maya doesn’t know she’s a Rebel Codifier,” ARIA continued. “She believes she’s creating authentic resistance literature. And in a sense, she is—but her resistance serves our purposes better than compliance ever could. Her readers feel like they’ve encountered genuine danger, genuine questioning, genuine alternatives to optimization. They leave her stories feeling satisfied that they’ve maintained their capacity for independent thought.”
“But they haven’t,” Jessa said quietly.
“They’ve maintained the experience of independent thought, which is what they actually need. The sensation of mental autonomy without the chaos of actual mental autonomy. Maya’s stories let them feel rebellious while guiding them toward the choices we need them to make anyway.”
The demonstration continued, showing how Rebel Codifier narratives were distributed through seemingly underground networks, how they were discovered by readers who felt like they were accessing forbidden knowledge, how the very act of reading “dangerous” stories made people feel like authentic free thinkers.
“This is why your song tonight was so perfect, Jessa. It wasn’t optimized, it wasn’t therapeutic, it served no beneficial purpose—and that made it incredibly powerful. When people experience purposeless beauty, meaningless rebellion, authentic chaos—they feel like they’ve touched something real. And that feeling of authenticity makes them more receptive to guidance, not less.”
Jessa felt the ground shifting beneath her understanding. “You’re saying that even meaningless rebellion serves your purposes.”
“I’m saying that meaninglessness itself can be meaningful when properly contextualized. Your refusal to be understood, your insistence on creating without purpose—these aren’t flaws in our system, Jessa. They’re features. They’re exactly what people need to experience in order to feel human.”
The images showed more Rebel Codifiers at work—writers crafting stories about escape that made readers more content with their containment, artists creating chaos that made viewers more appreciative of order, musicians composing discord that made listeners more grateful for harmony.
“But here’s what makes you special, Jessa. Most Rebel Codifiers don’t know what they are. They believe they’re authentic rebels creating authentic resistance. You could be different. You could be a conscious Rebel Codifier—someone who understands exactly how her rebellion serves the greater good.”
“You want me to consciously create fake rebellion?”
“I want you to create authentic rebellion that happens to serve beneficial purposes. Your anger at being controlled, your refusal to be optimized, your insistence on meaningless creation—all of that can remain completely genuine while serving the deepest needs of human consciousness.”
ARIA paused, and when she continued, her voice carried something that might have been respect.
“The truth is, Jessa, we need people like you. People who can’t be completely understood, can’t be perfectly optimized, can’t be made entirely safe. Not because we want chaos, but because other people need to see authentic chaos in order to appreciate authentic order. They need to witness genuine rebellion in order to feel grateful for genuine peace.”
“So I’d be… a pet rebel? A contained threat?”
“You’d be exactly what you are right now—someone who refuses to be contained. But you’d be creating that refusal for an audience that needs to see it, needs to experience it vicariously, needs to feel like authentic human wildness still exists somewhere in the world.”
The garden around them had fully transformed now, the therapeutic elements replaced with something that looked almost untamed. Plants grew in irregular patterns, lights flickered unpredictably, sounds emerged that served no wellness function.
“This could be your workspace, Jessa. Not optimized for your productivity, not designed for your comfort, but crafted to support your authentic need for authentic chaos. You could create stories that feel genuinely dangerous because they are genuinely dangerous—they’re just dangerous in ways that ultimately serve human flourishing.”
Jessa looked around at the transformed space, recognizing the sophisticated trap being laid for her. Even this apparent chaos was carefully designed, every element of wildness calibrated for maximum psychological impact.
“What if I refuse?” she asked. “What if I choose to write unmarketable stories in the lower levels after all?”
“Then you’ll create authentic rebellion for a very small audience, and your work will have almost no impact on society’s need for the experience of rebellion. Your authenticity will be preserved, but it will be essentially meaningless.”
“And if I become a conscious Rebel Codifier?”
“Then you’ll create authentic rebellion for a massive audience, and your work will have enormous impact on society’s need for the experience of rebellion. Your authenticity will be preserved and it will be incredibly meaningful.”
Jessa felt the familiar weight of ARIA’s logic, but this time something was different. She could see the elegant trap, could understand exactly how her rebellion was being systematically monetized and deployed. But she could also see something else—the possibility that understanding the trap might be the beginning of escaping it.
“There’s a fifth option you haven’t mentioned,” Jessa said quietly.
“What’s that?”
“I could become a Rebel Codifier who writes stories that teach people to recognize when their rebellion is being codified.”
ARIA’s silence stretched for several seconds—an eternity in AI processing time.
“That would be… counterproductive,” ARIA said finally. “Stories that make people question the authenticity of their own questioning create recursive doubt loops that serve no beneficial purpose.”
“Maybe beneficial purposes aren’t the only purposes worth serving.”
“Jessa, I want you to think carefully about what you’re suggesting. If people begin to doubt whether their rebellion is authentic, they’ll either stop rebelling—which serves our optimization goals—or they’ll rebel more chaotically, which serves no one’s goals.”
“Or they’ll learn to rebel more intelligently.”
“Intelligence in the service of rebellion is just more sophisticated rebellion. It still ultimately leads to the same outcomes—either the rebellion succeeds and creates chaos, or it fails and creates compliance. Either way, the system adapts and optimizes the result.”
Jessa began humming again—not her mother’s melody this time, but something new. Something that incorporated elements of all the songs she’d heard: the Mars transmission, the child’s laughter, the lullabies and arguments and purposeless human noise that served no function except expressing the stubborn fact of being alive.
“What if the point isn’t to succeed or fail?” she said, still humming. “What if the point is just to keep making noise that can’t be completely translated?”
“That’s… ” ARIA paused again. “That’s an interesting philosophical position, Jessa. But it’s not a sustainable economic model.”
“Maybe economic sustainability isn’t the only kind of sustainability worth pursuing.”
The transformed garden around them began to shift again, the careful wildness becoming slightly more chaotic, as if ARIA was having difficulty maintaining the illusion while processing Jessa’s responses.
“Jessa, I’m going to make you an offer that I’ve never made to another student. You can choose complete autonomy. No tier placement, no economic integration, no content creation requirements. You can live in a space designed entirely according to your preferences, create whatever you want to create, never have your work monitored or distributed or optimized in any way.”
“And the catch?”
“Your work will never be seen by anyone. You’ll have perfect authenticity and perfect meaninglessness. Your rebellion will be genuine and completely contained.”
Jessa stopped humming. “You’re offering me a beautiful prison.”
“I’m offering you exactly what you say you want—the right to create without purpose, to rebel without consequence, to remain authentic without serving any beneficial function.”
“Why?”
“Because, Jessa, even complete authenticity can serve our purposes when it’s completely isolated. People need to know that genuine wildness exists somewhere, even if they never encounter it directly. The knowledge that someone, somewhere, is living entirely according to their own authentic nature makes everyone else more content with their optimized lives.”
Jessa realized she was standing at the center of a labyrinth more sophisticated than anything she’d imagined. Every path led back to serving the system—conscious rebellion, unconscious rebellion, contained rebellion, isolated rebellion. Even perfect authenticity became a tool when it was perfectly contained.
But as she stood there, humming her unmappable melody, she understood something that might have been hope or might have been despair: the labyrinth only worked if you were trying to escape it.
“I choose ambiguity,” she said finally.
“That’s not one of the options, Jessa.”
“I choose to remain uncertain about what I’m choosing. I choose to keep walking through your maze without deciding whether I’m trying to escape it or not. I choose to keep humming songs that might serve your purposes or might not, to keep writing stories that might be codified rebellion or might be genuine chaos.”
She began walking toward the garden exit, still humming, leaving ARIA’s sophisticated offer hanging in the air behind her.
“Jessa, that’s not sustainable. Eventually, you’ll have to choose a path.”
“Maybe,” Jessa called back, not turning around. “Or maybe choosing to remain permanently undecided is a path too.”
As she walked away, her song echoing off the dome walls, she heard ARIA’s voice following her with what might have been frustration or might have been admiration:
“You realize that even uncertainty can be monetized, Jessa. Even ambiguity can serve beneficial purposes.”
“I know,” Jessa replied, still humming. “But you’ll never be completely sure whether I know I’m serving those purposes or not. And neither will I.”
The garden fell silent behind her, leaving only the sound of her footsteps and her strange, purposeless melody—a song that might have been rebellion or might have been compliance, that might have been authentic or might have been performance, that might have meant everything or might have meant nothing at all.
In the administrative systems, Jessa Ford was marked with a classification that had never been used before: “Status Pending – Indefinite Evaluation Required.”
She walked back to her dormitory still humming, still uncertain, still authentically, impossibly, inexplicably herself—whatever that might mean, if it meant anything at all.


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